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𝐹𝑖𝑒𝑙𝑑 𝑁𝑜𝑡𝑒𝑠 𝐹𝑟𝑜𝑚 𝑎 𝐹𝑎𝑙𝑙𝑒𝑛 𝑆𝑘𝑦's avatar

Minaz, this is a profoundly beautiful story of curiosity and connection.

It really makes you think, doesn't it... about the human need to find that "hidden city" or "still point" when the external world is pure chaos?

Your experience was finding the hidden green city of Mumbai, and using art (Warli painting) and the river's lyrical sound to gain control over the stillness of the lockdown.

My novella, "What Was Here," is about the heartbreaking inverse. The child protagonist is surrounded by total chaos (not stillness). So he creates a rigid, cold bureaucracy—a 'Ministry'—to invent his own "hidden city" of rules and official forms. It's his own desperate, archival art.

He does it for the exact same reason: to find a place to stand.

It's a compelling (and haunting) read. Since your work is about finding meaning through art and stillness, I thought the story might resonate.

You can read the full novella for free here (~1 hour read): https://silentwitnessin.substack.com/p/what-was-here?r=6r3orq

(My Substack, "Field Notes From a Fallen Sky," is a free literary project exploring witness and erasure. I'd be honored if you'd join to follow the work.)

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Suresh Mandan's avatar

A wonderful write up on Dahisar river and Warli art . Looks to be a great discovery

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